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Post  meganmyxxb5fan on Sat May 31, 2008 5:04 am

Characters:

Dustin

Kelly

Patrick

Carnell

Bryan

Megan

Reauna

Rokisha

Ebony

Kelsey

Shatara

It all started when Rokisha saw my boyfriend with another girl. At first I was heart-broken. But then I called Patrick since they were home for a couple day.

Patrick- Hey Ray whats wrong

Megan- Well can we we meet somewhere

Patrick- Megan Renee Edwards what the hell is up

Megan- Andy cheated on me okay so can I cruise over

Patrick- No I'll come over there

Megan- Okay I'll see you in a few

When he got there

Patrick- What happend

Megan- Ro saw him with Keyshia

Patrick- I warned you

Megan- God P Im sorry I didint listen to you

Patrick- Ray dont cry

He just held her knowing shed stop in a few minutes.

Megan- Patrick theres something you should know

Patrick- What

Megan- I never loved him

Patrick- Who do you love then Ray

Megan- My best guy friend but I dont know if he loves me back

Patrick thought.. Im her best guy friend and Ive loved her for a solid minute now I just never told her until now.

Patrick- Wow Ray I love you too

Megan- How do I know your not shitting me

He looked deep into her hazel eyes seeing her longing he leaned in and kissed her

Kelsey- Whoa Ray

Megan- Kels not now Im kind of busy

Reauna- Ray what is Pat doing here

Megan- He came to help me out of my my problem

Patrick- Ray I gotta bounce

He looked into her pleading eyes and said

Patrick- I'll be back I promise

And he left her waiting she fell asleep waiting for him to come back. He came back around 3:00 A.M.

Patrick- Ray

Megan- 3 am Pat

Patrick- I know sorry can I spend the night D's pissed me off

Megan- Yeah here

She gave him room in the bed after he undressed he got in

Megan- Patrick

Patrick- Yeah

Megan- If we do get together promise me something

Patrick- Anything

Megan- Promise me that you'll never hurt me or break my heart

Patrick- I swear I wont Megan

Megan- Thanks

He pecked her lips before falling asleep

She just laid there watching him sleep

The next morning

Patrick had his arms around Megan

Patrick- Good morning

Megan- Good morning so what you wanna do

Patrick- Make you mine

He said kissing her neck in all the right spots

Megan- Well what if I want to be yours

Patrick- Then Id give you this

Megan- Tiffany's this has got to be good

She opened it and almost cried

Patrick- You love it I can tell

She kissed him full on the lips she never wanted the moment to end

Patrick- I'll take that as a yes

Megan- You better

To be continued..
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Post  Undacovab5lover on Sat May 31, 2008 8:18 pm

awww cute!!!
patrick new it was him
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Post  bryans_homegurl_4life on Sat May 31, 2008 8:21 pm

uhmm kissing already!!! Shocked
weres rees belt?
bumpies!!
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Post  patrick's_1inonly on Sat May 31, 2008 8:22 pm

haha wobbles!!
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Post  kelly's_1inonly_homegurl on Sat May 31, 2008 8:23 pm

bryans_homegurl_4life wrote:uhmm kissing already!!! Shocked
weres rees belt?
bumpies!!
let me go get it
*hand wobbles the belt*
haha bumpies!!

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Post  Carnellz_BabyGurl. on Sat May 31, 2008 8:33 pm

oooooooooo this is good
bump it up
asap
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So Incredible

Post  meganmyxxb5fan on Sat May 31, 2008 10:10 pm

Chapter 2

Reauna- Ray

Megan- Yeah

Reauna- Whats up with Pat leaving here this morning

Megan- Nothing

Kelsey- Then whats the necklace for

Megan- He gave it to me

They went crazy

She texted him

Babe they're going crazy save me please

They were in rehersal

Patrick- 5 minutes guys

Kelly- Okay

Babe how are they going crazy

They saw you leave this morning

Damn I'll be done in a few I promise okay

Man baby Im stuck here all alone

Hey I know I miss you too babe I gotta go I'll be there soon

Okay I love you xoxo Ray

I love you too xoxo Patrick

He got to the house at noon

Patrick- Hey beautiful

Megan- Hey sexy

Patrick- Im so happy right now

Megan- So am I

He kissed her for awhile

Rokisha- Ray

Megan- Im busy

Rokisha- I see that when did yall start dating

Patrick- This morning

Reauna- Holy shit

Rokisha- With a kiss like that wait a minute you told him you loved him

Megan- Well I do love him

Patrick picked her up carring her to her bedroom

Megan- Babe what are we doing

Patrick- Getting alone time

Megan- Damn babe I love the idea

Patrick- I thought you would

Later that night

Patrick- Lets go to my crib babe

Megan- You and D still going at it

Patrick- Yeah so I changed my mind Im gonna go and get some stuff do you mind if I have clothes in your closet

Megan- No Patrick I dont mind but I do mind you leaving me

9:00 P.M.

Megan- Baby

Patrick- Hey beautiful Im back

Megan- Yay

Patrick- Ray

Megan- Yeah

She looked at him he had something on his mind

Patrick- I love you more than anything and I find something new about you everyday that I love almost instantly

Megan- Dustin kicked you out didnt he

Patrick- Naw momma's the only one that can do that but honestly D's hating on us

Megan- Ebony

Ebony- What love birds

Megan thought I hate it when she says that

Megan- Go to the Breeding's D's been hating so talk to him about it

Ebony- Ive been talking to him he isnt hating he thinks yall look good together he's mad cuz he aint got me so yeah I'll be back D wants to ask me something

Megan- Take Ro and Re with you and drop Kelsey off at the mall

Ebony- Okay

When they all gone

Patrick- Im still keeping stuff here

Megan- Okay no worries

To Be Continued...
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Post  Undacovab5lover on Sat May 31, 2008 11:00 pm

Uhmm always trying
to get me & Ro to leave
so yall can do the biz!!!
haha!!
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Post  patrick's_1inonly on Sat May 31, 2008 11:01 pm

Undacovab5lover wrote:Uhmm always trying
to get me & Ro to leave
so yall can do the biz!!!
haha!!
bumpies!!
yea i see that!!!
freakyness!!!
bumpies!!!

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Post  kelly's_1inonly_homegurl on Sat May 31, 2008 11:03 pm

Undacovab5lover wrote:Uhmm always trying
to get me & Ro to leave
so yall can do the biz!!!
haha!!
bumpies!!
yea!! rite!!! whats with that megan???
well i understand why ReE!!! but me
bumpies!!!

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Post  bryans_homegurl_4life on Sat May 31, 2008 11:04 pm

kelly's_1inonly_homegurl wrote:
Undacovab5lover wrote:Uhmm always trying
to get me & Ro to leave
so yall can do the biz!!!
haha!!
bumpies!!
yea!! rite!!! whats with that megan???
well i understand why ReE!!! but me
bumpies!!!
haha ur funny!!
freaky ppl!!!!
bumpies!!
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Post  meganmyxxb5fan on Sat May 31, 2008 11:08 pm

Maybe maybe not you'll never know....Im updating in a few.... I had to get rid of you cuz it was our ALONE TIME and Im not saying we had sex either cuz we didnt I would have stated we did.


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Post  meganmyxxb5fan on Sun Jun 01, 2008 12:07 am

They had to go on the road 2 weeks later.

Megan- Baby I'll miss you

Patrick- I'll miss you too love but do me a favor

Megan- Anything

Patrick- Keep yuor phone on at all times and never stop thinking about me

Megan- You got it

2 years later Dustin, Ebony,Reauna,Carnell,Kelly,Rokisha,Bryan and Shatara started dating and Megan and Patrick moved in together and he wanted her to be his forever.

At the school they met at.

Megan- My old locker

Patrickk- Open it there could be a clue to what I wanna ask you

At the fall dance were we first fell in love. Many years later that night still reads perfectly in my head. With the last dance came our first kiss. Look to your left look to your right and you'll find another clue with some insight.

Follow the map to our first date and all the the things we could create.

The table was exactly as she remembered except there was a photo album there. Looking at all the good times they'd had made her realize she never wanted to loose him.

Patrick- Look in the back

Seasons come and seesons go but our love will always grow never seeing a passing glance I know why we got together at our first highschool dance now that the day is over and done I only have one question to ask you

She looked down at him.

Patrick- Megan Renee Edwards will you marry me

Megan- Of course Id do anything for you Patrick

Patrick slid the ring on her finger.

Megan- Its amazing

Patrick- So are you

Megan- You know you are too

Patrick- Yeah

A year later they were married.

To Be Continued
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Post  Undacovab5lover on Sun Jun 01, 2008 3:19 am

awwwwwww
patrick married her
your storys seems to go fast!!!
bumpies!!

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Post  kelly's_1inonly_homegurl on Sun Jun 01, 2008 3:24 am

Undacovab5lover wrote:awwwwwww
patrick married her
your storys seems to go fast!!!
bumpies!!
yea they do!!
bumpies!!

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Post  bryans_homegurl_4life on Sun Jun 01, 2008 3:26 am

kelly's_1inonly_homegurl wrote:
Undacovab5lover wrote:awwwwwww
patrick married her
your storys seems to go fast!!!
bumpies!!
yea they do!!
bumpies!!
but her stories be good
like food!!
bumpies!!!
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Post  Carnellz_BabyGurl. on Sun Jun 01, 2008 5:20 pm

lol
bumpz yo!
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Post  meganmyxxb5fan on Sun Jun 01, 2008 9:40 pm

Before I start the post Im going to be writting 2 stories at once. The other story is called I must Love Drama. Its gonna be slower paced then my other stories. No Im not quitting So Incredible I just want to have an emotional story like Reauna's "Is Anybody Listening". With that said heres the post.

In Hawaii

Megan- I still cant believe D's calling you

Patrick- Hon I know

Megan- No you dont when he calls I get the short end of the stick and Im sick of it damn it

Patrick- Wow you're pissed big time

He turned off his phone and leaned into kiss her and got her to calm down.

Patrick- Wanna go for a walk on the beach

Megan- Yes

Back in ATL

Dustin- He's not answering

He called Megan's phone.

Megan- What Dustin

Patrick- Shit

Megan- With me on our honeymoon shit stop calling we'll be back in a couple weeks

And she hung up

Ebony- D stop trippin' hed married now

Dustin- I know babe but we have shows when they get back

Ebony- You're stressed come here

Dustin- What you got in mind

Ebony- You'll see

The next morning

Ebony- Well how you feeling

Dustin- Calm cool and collected we have to do that again soon

Ebony just laughed and said

Ebony- Fine but not tonight

Dustin- Come on Eb please

Ebony- Begging wont help D I wanna keep you waiting

Dustin- Why

Ebony- To keep you wanting more

Dustin- I love you Eb

Ebony- Wow

Dustin- Do you love me

Ebony- We wouldnt have been horny last night if I didnt Dustin but you need to say that everyday cuz it feels good to hear it from you

Dustin- You got it babydoll

Reauna- Carnell

Carnell- Yeah baby Re

Reauna- I love you

Carnell- I love you too

The first time is always the best to hear she thought.

Carnell- Come here I wanna show you something
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Post  Carnellz_BabyGurl. on Sun Jun 01, 2008 10:57 pm

ooooooooooo i wonder what carnell wants to show her
bumpz
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Post  Undacovab5lover on Sun Jun 01, 2008 11:30 pm

he wants to show me somthing!!
hmmm what is is????
bumpies!!

aww your stories is emotional sis!!!
i didnt know u like my story like dat!!

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Post  meganmyxxb5fan on Sun Jun 01, 2008 11:33 pm

Undacovab5lover wrote:he wants to show me somthing!!
hmmm what is is????
bumpies!!

aww your stories is emotional sis!!!
i didnt know u like my story like dat!!

Well yeah I do Re! Im talking really Emotional here its good go read the intro to the new story.
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Post  patrick's_1inonly on Sun Jun 01, 2008 11:34 pm

Undacovab5lover wrote:he wants to show me somthing!!
hmmm what is is????
bumpies!!

aww your stories is emotional sis!!!
i didnt know u like my story like dat!!

yea!! what is it????
C'mon Megan bumpies!!

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Post  kelly's_1inonly_homegurl on Sun Jun 01, 2008 11:46 pm

he'll probley give her something
from the heart a necklas or soemthing
bumpies sis!!!

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Post  bryans_homegurl_4life on Sun Jun 01, 2008 11:47 pm

kelly's_1inonly_homegurl wrote:he'll probley give her something
from the heart a necklas or soemthing
bumpies sis!!!

i think he will to rokisha
maybe well have to find out!!!
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Post  meganmyxxb5fan on Mon Jun 02, 2008 5:18 pm

Reauna- What is it

Carnell took her hand.

Carnell- You'll see babe

Reauna- Hey now fair

Carnell- I think its fair I wanna surprise you

Reauna- Okay

He took her to the skating rink where they first met at. They loved each other since thatday but never told each other til now.

Carnell- Being atthe same college really helped us dont you think

Reauna- Yeah I mean I dont think Iwanna lose you ever again

Knowing she almost did once still killed her to this day

Carnell- Really

Reauna- Duh Car I love you

Carnell- Aw Re yuo're something else you know that

Reauna- Is that good or bad

Carnell- Its good for real its good

Reauna- Come here

Carnell- Why

Reauna- Carnell quit playing and get over here

Carnell- Yes Re

Reauna kissed him

Carnell- Damn babe we gotta do that more often. I'll be right back Im gonna get our skates.

To Be Continued..
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