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Post  `faith . on Tue May 13, 2008 12:25 am



“Careful,
responsible,
reliable,
safe.
Me.
But not who I want to be.
I wanna be bold.
Not care
about who I hurt;
go
after something
full-heartedly.
Not give a damn.
Seize the moment
and
Lose myself
in my search for happiness.
take a pink crayon
and make it the sky.
take an orange crayon
and make it the grass.
Pick up any crayon,
take a chance,
and color outside the lines.
But who am I?
Restricted,
cautious,
dependable,
predictable.
There's too much to lose,
too much to risk,
but I just wish I'd
color outside the lines.”

The classroom broke into applause once she finished her last line. She just gave a small, timid smile before she began her walk to her seat.
To the rest of the class, this was just another poetry assignment, for her it was a way to pour her heart out, without anyone noticing. Her heart in each word, each pencil stroke across the lined paper held in her left hand. In her heart she pleaded for someone to hear her, rescue her from her own demise, take her hand and color her world...
but nothing.

She just sighed as the student behind her began to walk up the front of the class.
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"So tell them kids to keep coloring outside the lines
Until they lose they limitations and they minds is free"
--- Travis McCoy of Gym Class Heroes




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Post  Undacovab5lover on Tue May 13, 2008 12:27 am

yay!!!!!! its finally here iv been waiting (waiting) but thank u!!!!!!!!!

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Post  kelly's_1inonly_homegurl on Tue May 13, 2008 12:28 am

ahhhhhhhhhhhh Omg!!!! Finally!!! (lmfao)

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Post  patrick's_1inonly on Tue May 13, 2008 12:29 am

yall are crazy
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bumpz Faith'

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Post  bryans_homegurl_4life on Tue May 13, 2008 12:32 am

colorin outside the lines is finally here!! Very Happy
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let me go get my markers and crayons on im ready (lmfao)
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Post  jay;love_ on Tue May 13, 2008 1:11 am

hellz yeah! the legacy has started.


& we both know i LOVE travieee <333



i cant wait to see what all this fuss is about ;]
and the interactive-ness? and stuff.

im excited for this one.
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Post  _x-i heart pat.-x_ on Tue May 13, 2008 5:37 am

bumpies!!!
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Post  *intotherush on Tue May 13, 2008 6:25 am

bumpies faith

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Post  Undacovab5lover on Tue May 13, 2008 1:33 pm

bumpies!!!!

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Post  `faith . on Wed May 14, 2008 12:06 am

jay;love_ wrote:
& we both know i LOVE travieee <333
&&' i love him too.
i was vacuuming my house
sunday night listening to
"To Bob Ross With Love"
when i heard that line
& ran to my computer.

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tomorrow thanks for
the bumps &&' comments
keep them coming :-]
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Post  |*KiMA*| on Wed May 14, 2008 1:11 am

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Post  _x-i heart pat.-x_ on Wed May 14, 2008 1:38 am

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Post  Undacovab5lover on Wed May 14, 2008 2:02 am

like bam!!!
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bumpz!!!

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Post  free - dumb . on Wed May 14, 2008 7:42 pm

as usual im late . lol .
bumps !
its outt ! AAH !
i see zoe kravitz .
oh yayer !

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Post  `faith . on Thu May 15, 2008 12:17 am



An UnFaithful Production
»[Started Picture]:
the 13th of May
»[Finished Coloring]:
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»[Type]:
Drama
»[Rating]:
Mature
»[Credit]:
The Boy Shopping series.
I give it all the credit it deserves.
»[Dedication]:
to All4B5,
new forum,
new start





.one:: struck down by reality.
She watched as he moved up and down the court drilling the ball with ease. He was in his natural habitat & everyone knew that; that’s why they came and watched.
He’d earned renown at the age of 15, and that was before he really got into baseball.
The high school loved him for the fact they had been undefeated ever he stepped into its halls. The agents loved him because he had mastered the art of being a team player before they had a chance to get to him. The town loved his because he was a local celebrity. The girls loved him because he was easy on the eyes & had name that was a bona fide in.
She loved love him for him. His personality, generosity, his silliness, charm; everything. But he knew none of this. How could she ever tell him with all things in the way?
She was the first one to jump up when the buzzer with off, signaling they had won another game. The crowd went wild with cheers and applause as the team jumped up and down with joy. It was then that the boys who had stolen her heart: teammates Bryan Calvin Wales- her secret love, and Carnell Robert Young- her dream boy, pulled each other into a tight victory hug while her heart did a back flip. Adrenaline still pumping, she ran down the bleachers and into the sea of people piling onto the court. She pushed and shoved her way through, not caring who she hurt, yelling, “Bryan! Bryan!” Once she had made it to the center, their eyes locked and he smirked. She lightly giggled and ran into his open arms.
“Congrats,” she whispered gently into his ear. “Thanks,” he cheerily said as he pulled out of the embrace. He just stood there as the gym lights reflected off the sweat on his skin. He opened his mouth to speak but was pulled away by a group of girls. She just sighed, used to it. He turned his head to her and shrugged. She just pointed at the gym doors. He nodded his head, understanding. Like every other game she’d wait for the celebrating to be over and for him to shower and change outside the gym doors. They’d then go get something to eat with some of Bryan’s teammates.
As she started to make her way through the crowd she saw Carnell and his best friends being admired by their usual group of groupies. “Great game Carnell,” she yelled attempting to get his attention. “Thanks,” he yelled, not even looking in her direction. She chastised herself for even trying as she walked away.
She hated herself sometimes for being so stupid, so naďve, so optimistic. She’d be on cloud nine in her dreams, only to smacked by reality when she’d awoken. But she couldn’t help who she loved, as much as she wanted to. Because is she had her way she’d never fallen for her best friend or someone so unattainable.


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boring, i know.
i just needed to get
that out of the way.
stick with me, it'll
get better. promise.

you'll find out who the main
girl is next post.

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this story is different frrom others
because the readers have an active
part. when we certain parts of the story
i'll ask yall to vote for what should happen
next. the choice with the most votes wins.
so stayed tuned, things will get good.


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next post, some time this weekend;;
so
upz.
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Post  Undacovab5lover on Thu May 15, 2008 12:25 am

OMG i cant wait that long affraid its all ready interesting!!!
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i wonder who this girl maybe?????

bumpies!!!!


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Post  kelly's_1inonly_homegurl on Thu May 15, 2008 12:27 am

Undacovab5lover wrote:OMG i cant wait that long affraid its all ready interesting!!!
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i wonder who this girl maybe?????
me 2 ree!!
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why did u stop???
bumpies!!!


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Post  patrick's_1inonly on Thu May 15, 2008 12:29 am

that so dont count cause u stopped
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i think we gonna have to get her Ree. Ro. Wobbles

bumpz!!!


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Post  bryans_homegurl_4life on Thu May 15, 2008 12:31 am

patrick's_1inonly wrote:that so dont count cause u stopped
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i think we gonna have to get her Ree. Ro. Wobbles

yep yep
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Post  _x-i heart pat.-x_ on Thu May 15, 2008 1:28 am

hawt!bumpies!!!
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Post  jay;love_ on Thu May 15, 2008 3:24 am

aww, i feel her.

dangit. nell is a douche in this one =[ lol!


you cant MAKE yourself stop.
nice post, fai-fai! ;]
cant wait for moreee!
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Post  free - dumb . on Thu May 15, 2008 7:56 am

you gotta bump! ooh, wonda who's da main girlie?
anywhoo, b u m p s .


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Post  :)MaKiN_SeXy on Thu May 15, 2008 8:38 am

BuMp D@t 1...2...3


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Post  `faith . on Thu May 15, 2008 11:56 pm

you'll find out next post
freedom. thanks for bumps
and comments. more this
weekend so....
upz.
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Post  |*KiMA*| on Fri May 16, 2008 1:13 am

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