i t h u r t s. (updated 5.17.08)
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Re: i t h u r t s. (updated 5.17.08)
UM MISS CHICKY!!??? SKITTLES IT! WE TRYING TO GET YOU TO THE NEXT PAGE!! ABSENCE OF POST = THERESA FOAMING AT THE MOUTH LOL *J/K TINK* BUT SKITTLES IT!
Re: i t h u r t s. (updated 5.17.08)
no theresa was eattinTippy wrote:UM MISS CHICKY!!??? SKITTLES IT! WE TRYING TO GET YOU TO THE NEXT PAGE!! ABSENCE OF POST = THERESA FOAMING AT THE MOUTH LOL *J/K TINK* BUT SKITTLES IT!
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Re: i t h u r t s. (updated 5.17.08)
Tinkerbell011 wrote:no theresa was eattinTippy wrote:UM MISS CHICKY!!??? SKITTLES IT! WE TRYING TO GET YOU TO THE NEXT PAGE!! ABSENCE OF POST = THERESA FOAMING AT THE MOUTH LOL *J/K TINK* BUT SKITTLES IT!
eating what, and alka seltzer *yells* who done told Theresa it was a piece of candy? lmao just kidding Theresa got more sense than all of us combined. i just like teasing her.
Re: i t h u r t s. (updated 5.17.08)
OMG TAY SIS I FOUND U (lol) BUMPIES SIS
>>>>reauna<<<<<
>>>>reauna<<<<<
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Re: i t h u r t s. (updated 5.17.08)
Tippy wrote:Tinkerbell011 wrote:no theresa was eattinTippy wrote:UM MISS CHICKY!!??? SKITTLES IT! WE TRYING TO GET YOU TO THE NEXT PAGE!! ABSENCE OF POST = THERESA FOAMING AT THE MOUTH LOL *J/K TINK* BUT SKITTLES IT!
eating what, and alka seltzer *yells* who done told Theresa it was a piece of candy? lmao just kidding Theresa got more sense than all of us combined. i just like teasing her.
ravoli and breadsticks yummy
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Re: i t h u r t s. (updated 5.17.08)
sixth chapter
I walked in the house to see Dustin no where in sight. Hmm. I guess he went out. I went into the kitchen to get a can of soda out of the fridge when I felt someone pulle me by my hair. "And just where the hell were you?" It was Dustin. And he was angry as ever. "I was at the basketball court with Carnell." "Carnell? Carnell! You've been spending alot of time with this nigga haven't you? What am I not good enough for you Taylor?" I gripped his hands around my neck so tight. "Baby stop! You're hurting me!" "I don't give a damn! This is what your dumb ass diserves." He was choking me so tight, my circulation cut off. I looked at myself in the mirrored ceiling above us and noticed the my face turned purple. My eyes were blood-shot red. "Dus-ti . . . stop . . . p-plea . .se." He ignored my cries for help and squeezed my neck even tighter. Everything started to become blurry. I seen my whole life flash before my eyes. And at that point . . . I knew . . . that this . . . was the end of my life . . . .
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"Oh my God! Carnell look! She opened her eyes." I heard Diana crying. W-what happened to me? I looked around and noticed that I was in a hospital. My eyes stopped and I smiled as I seen Carnell at my bed side. "Carnell saved you Tay." "Huh?" "You left you're bag at the courts. So I was gonna return it to you. That's when I noticed you door was open and Dustin running out of the house like he was up to something. And that's when I saw you on the ground in the living room, barely alive. I'm so glad you're okay." I can't believe it. He really saved me? But Dustin . . . how could he do this to me? He tried to kill me. I know if I leave him, he might try to go after Carnell. And If I stay with him, it's gonna be even more drama. Why do I have to be the one lost in love? "Where's your girl Nell?" "Who Aundre? Well, let's just say it didn't really work out between me and her. She acted to much like a little kid." "Oh . . . I'm sorry." "It's aight." Nothing but silence had filled the room. No one said a word. There was nothing really to say at this point. The drama I believe, is never going to end.
I walked in the house to see Dustin no where in sight. Hmm. I guess he went out. I went into the kitchen to get a can of soda out of the fridge when I felt someone pulle me by my hair. "And just where the hell were you?" It was Dustin. And he was angry as ever. "I was at the basketball court with Carnell." "Carnell? Carnell! You've been spending alot of time with this nigga haven't you? What am I not good enough for you Taylor?" I gripped his hands around my neck so tight. "Baby stop! You're hurting me!" "I don't give a damn! This is what your dumb ass diserves." He was choking me so tight, my circulation cut off. I looked at myself in the mirrored ceiling above us and noticed the my face turned purple. My eyes were blood-shot red. "Dus-ti . . . stop . . . p-plea . .se." He ignored my cries for help and squeezed my neck even tighter. Everything started to become blurry. I seen my whole life flash before my eyes. And at that point . . . I knew . . . that this . . . was the end of my life . . . .
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"Oh my God! Carnell look! She opened her eyes." I heard Diana crying. W-what happened to me? I looked around and noticed that I was in a hospital. My eyes stopped and I smiled as I seen Carnell at my bed side. "Carnell saved you Tay." "Huh?" "You left you're bag at the courts. So I was gonna return it to you. That's when I noticed you door was open and Dustin running out of the house like he was up to something. And that's when I saw you on the ground in the living room, barely alive. I'm so glad you're okay." I can't believe it. He really saved me? But Dustin . . . how could he do this to me? He tried to kill me. I know if I leave him, he might try to go after Carnell. And If I stay with him, it's gonna be even more drama. Why do I have to be the one lost in love? "Where's your girl Nell?" "Who Aundre? Well, let's just say it didn't really work out between me and her. She acted to much like a little kid." "Oh . . . I'm sorry." "It's aight." Nothing but silence had filled the room. No one said a word. There was nothing really to say at this point. The drama I believe, is never going to end.
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Re: i t h u r t s. (updated 5.17.08)
you know what sis DUSTIN is making me mad!! (lol) even though this is a story i would beat his a*s
>>>Ree<<<
>>>Ree<<<
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Re: i t h u r t s. (updated 5.17.08)
Undacovab5lover wrote:you know what sis DUSTIN is making me mad!! (lol) even though this is a story i would beat his a*s
>>>Ree<<<
BUMPS!!
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Re: i t h u r t s. (updated 5.17.08)
Dmn Dustin, you're on a never ending spiral towards my fist with your pissy boy antics. sucker ngga. skittles it!
Re: i t h u r t s. (updated 5.17.08)
<-----I lIke that one lol
bump It up
bump It up
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Re: i t h u r t s. (updated 5.17.08)
WTF dog I wuda beat his a.ss...but bumps gurly
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Re: i t h u r t s. (updated 5.17.08)
Wasant I in this anyways bumpz Tay
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Re: i t h u r t s. (updated 5.17.08)
TREViiSA wrote:Wasant I in this anyways bumpz Tay
lol damn visa i forgot who was in my cast. ever since they delete our old board lol. the only person i remember was dian since she's in all of my storys lol. but yeah i think you were in it lol.
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Re: i t h u r t s. (updated 5.17.08)
bumpz Tay'
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Re: i t h u r t s. (updated 5.17.08)
Bumpz sis!!!
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Re: i t h u r t s. (updated 5.17.08)
BuMpS sIs
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Re: i t h u r t s. (updated 5.17.08)
ooh i like this story....it's really good. Carnell...hmmm. Dustin, I have no words. I would've been in jail....or I would've died trying to kill him myself.
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