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Post  carnell#1babygurl4lyfe on Sat May 31, 2008 12:17 am

Bumps gurly&u shudn't have said dat

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Post  beautiful.M0NEE on Sat May 31, 2008 9:07 am

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Post  TEDDY™ on Sat Jun 07, 2008 8:46 am

Carnell

"Nina, you know I love you baby." I told her as I kissed her on her forehead.
"Lord knows I love you too, Carnell."
We were alone at the Jonesmyer Park. It was late, and the moon shined perfectly on her brown skin. Everything that night was just perfect. She nibbled on my ear and I caressed her thighs slowly with my right hand as my other leaned back onto the damp grass.
We had spent most of our time here, in this very park, every night just staring into eachother's eyes and thinking of our future.
"I want to ask you something.."
I said taking the velvet box I had obsessed over ever since I bought the precious gift inside out of my coat pocket. Her eyes got wide and she swallowed hard, standing on her knees.
"O.. Okay?"
I pulled out the box, and opened it just as she squealed.
"Will you be Mrs. Breeding?"
Before I knew it she embraced me in the biggest hug I could possibly imagine. She was sucking all the love right from my very soul.
"Yes! Yes!"
I slipped the jewel onto her finger, and tears dripped down her cheeks. I wiped them for her with my sleeve, these were happy tears. The tears I had wanted to see her cry...

"Oh Carnell.. Carnell?"

I stared into her eyes longer.

"CARNELL?!"
"HUH?!"

I was woke dead from my sleep. What the hell? Another one of my dreams again. My boy Charleston laughed as I wiped the drool from my face.
"Man, you were knocked cold. Another dream?" he said dribbling his basketball in my house.
"Ay, don't dribble that in the crib. Yasmin doesn't like it."
I stood up and stretched, exhausted from the complete control Nina had taken over me.
"You seriously need to get some help, my dude."
Yeah, I'll admit I did need help. Ever since Nina kicked me from her life... I couldn't sleep, couldn't eat. Hell, I couldn't even go out and have a good time with my friends anymore. This was insane.
"I know, man." I said leaving it at that and walking into the kitchen to grab some oj.
"You know what I think..." Charleston said making himself comfortable at the bar.
"You and Yasmin need a divorce."
Of course, that made me spit my juice all over the kitchen floor.
"Nigga are you out of your mind?"
He raised his eyebrows and shrugged.
"She is my wife. I made a commitment to her, and I'm going to abide by it."
I grabbed a towel and swiped it across the cold tile.
"Hey man, I'm just saying. Ever since fine ass Nina moved up here, you've been spending all your precious time with her. You think that's sticking to your commitment?"
That made me think. So yeah, I wasn't really doing my part but what was a man to do?
"Maybe you're right.. But I don't know.. I still love Yasmin, a lot."
"Well partner, you're shit out of luck then huh?"
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Post  meganmyxxb5fan on Sat Jun 07, 2008 10:22 pm

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Post  SHAWN™ on Mon Jun 09, 2008 9:13 pm

BUMPz!
i REALLY LiKE THiz STORY =)

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Post  jay;love_ on Mon Jun 09, 2008 11:39 pm

commitment shamittment whatevvvs.

nell its over if you dreamin' bout wife`n some other girl.
all its doing is hurting yasmin.

hmmm, it'd be crazy if she was cheating on him too...

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Post  carnell#1babygurl4lyfe on Tue Jun 10, 2008 7:25 pm

OMG wow but bumps gurly&DAMN

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Post  TEDDY™ on Tue Jun 17, 2008 9:29 am

My car sat longingly in the gas station parking lot, baking in the heat. I had just gotten off of work and here was where I sat, too tired to go any further.. at least for a moment. My eyes skimmed towards the door and that's when I saw Nina. My heart felt like it was beating a thousand times a second. I jumped from the drivers seat and ran inside the air conditioned store.
"Hey." I said grabbing her arm. She shot around, just as surprised as I was.
"What do you want?" She said turning back around and continuing down the aisle.
"To talk."
She stopped, drinks and snacks full in her arms, and her eyes pleaded for what I had to say.
"About?"
Of course, here was where I was stuck. I didn't know what I wanted to talk to her about. So I stalled.
"Uh, you need some help with those?"
I took the goods from her arms and she rested her hand on her hip.
"C'mon Carnell, I don't have all day."
We both walked up to the cash register and I sat the things down while the man rung them up.
"Look just come to my house tonight, around eight. Could you do that for me?"
She sighed deeply, obviously not wanting to go through with it.
"Fine, just don't expect me to stay long."
She grabbed her bag and headed to her car. Yes, finally. A time for her to realize that she needed me just as bad as I needed her...


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Okay, I know it's short!
but just stick with me here.
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Post  meganmyxxb5fan on Tue Jun 17, 2008 4:15 pm

Oh my god he better tell her he still loves her dang
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Post  jay;love_ on Tue Jun 17, 2008 10:20 pm

sticking with you hereeee ;]

haha, she just popped outta NO where.
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Post  `faith . on Wed Jun 18, 2008 12:27 am

---new reader.

carnell is a mess. he
needs to make up his
mind and pick one. nina
is too good a women to
be his sideline chick. &'
he's he got a good thing
at home, why'd he run to
nina in the 1st place. &&'
i hope his wife realizes that
when ya man doesn't wanna
have sex anymore, he's
probably getting it somewhere
else. &&&' nina's dumb for agreeing.
upz.
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Post  |*KiMA*| on Wed Jun 18, 2008 4:18 pm

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Post  TEDDY™ on Fri Jun 20, 2008 9:19 am

--- thanks for the bumps :]




It was more humid than usual in my house. I sipped my ice water and stared at the clock. Nina would be arriving in five minutes, or so she said. I tapped my fingers on my cup and didn't take my glare off of the big flashing red numbers. Yasmin was out with Patrice, one of her friends from middle school. Of course, she was always out. This was nothing new to me. I heard a soft knock on the door and I sat my cup down quickly. I smoothed my hand over my waves and opened the door.
"Hey.." I said. And she pushed her way into the house. Sitting her coat on the rack she said,
"Okay Carnell, tell me what you have to say and I'm out of here."
She sat her hands on her hips. Man, she drove me insane and didnt even have to try.
"Come, sit."
I led her into the dim lit living room and we took a seat on the couch.
"Look Nina," I said before looking directly into her eyes.
"I've .. missed you terribly since you kicked me from your life."
She sighed softly and findled with her ring.
"Carnell.. I did not kick you anywhere."
She took another sigh.
"I just love you too much to share you."
I took both of her hands in mine and kissed them.
"I hear where you're coming from."
She embraced me in a hug. That moment made me weak, because I hadn't felt her body against mine in a long time. I grabbed her face and kissed her. She resisted at first but soon gave in .
"Do you still love me Carnell?"
Her face was that of a child. Her lips a bit pouty and her eyes glistening like she had been crying.
"More than anything."
We kissed again.

And that's when it happened.
"Yeah, girl tonight was fun."

Me and Nina looked up and there was Yasmin and Patrice, arms full of shopping bags, standing at the door. It felt like an eternity before someone finally spoke.
"Um, Yasmin.. I'll just call you later okay?" Patrice said, obviously uncomfortable. She gave Yasmine a look, and then walked hesitantly out the front door. Hell, I wish I could've went with her. Yasmin sat her bags in the kitchen and came into the living room where me and Nina sat. She was calm, something I was not used to.

"Hello, Carnell." she said crossing her arms across her chest.
I gulped, and looked up at my wife.
"H-Hey Yasmin."
Nina let go of my hands and stood up.
"Uh, I think I should leave now." she said and grabbed her coat off the rack.
"No I think you should stay."
Yasmin and Nina stared at each other. My ass was glued to the couch. I was afraid to even think about moving in a situation where Yasmin could bite my head the fuck off. Nina put her coat back on the rack and headed back over to where we were. She wiped the sweat from her palms on her pinstriped skirt.
"Would someone like to explain?" Yasmin said making herself comfortable on the loveseat. I looked Nina in the eyes. She was about to explode.
"Uh..." I said. My throat was dry. There were just no words to say.
"Would someone like to fucking explain?!"
Yasmin was getting impatient, and I was about to shit on myself.
"Yasmin baby..."
"Don't baby me!"
The air in the room was thick with anger. Nina spoke
"Yasmin, theres nothing to explain."
That set her off.
"Nothing to explain?! So I walk into my house and you and my husband are locking lips and there is nothing to explain?"
Yasmin rubbed her temples, furious and beaten to the core.
"And to think my own sister... my own flesh and blood ... would do some shit like this. Nina, get the fuck out of my house."
I stared at Nina, then back at Yasmin. Nina ambled her way to the door and slipped on her coat. She took one final look at me before saying,
"I'm sorry it had to be this way." and left.
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Post  carnell#1babygurl4lyfe on Fri Jun 20, 2008 3:35 pm

BUmps

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Post  |*KiMA*| on Fri Jun 20, 2008 5:02 pm

dang...it was her sister!
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Post  meganmyxxb5fan on Fri Jun 20, 2008 5:26 pm

Dang
But bumps
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Post  `faith . on Fri Jun 20, 2008 7:17 pm

carnell is such a dick!
why would he marry
her sister &&' why did
nina let her! OMG. lol
they both fucked
themselves over.
Tasmin deserved better
from both of them.
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Post  jay;love_ on Tue Jun 24, 2008 9:11 am

-gasp-


nina is yasmin's sister...
oh my god! =O






Carnell, you shoulda divorced her a long time ago stupid!
But girl, the way you wrote the story makes me feel worse for Nell & Nina than i do for Yasmin.
lol, they were just making up =[

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Post  `shortie[NANNi] on Wed Jun 25, 2008 6:50 am

→New Reader←

OMG Shocked
At first I was shocked to find
out Nina was "the other woman."
And when she told Carnell not to
come back I felt really sad and wanted
to cry. Now they seem to be back
together and it turns out
THAT'S HER DAMN SISTER?!?!?!
OMG Shocked Nice one Carnell. Doin' the sisters... cheers

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Post  TEDDY™ on Fri Jun 27, 2008 7:42 am

`shortie[NANNi] wrote:
→New Reader←

OMG Shocked
At first I was shocked to find
out Nina was "the other woman."
And when she told Carnell not to
come back I felt really sad and wanted
to cry. Now they seem to be back
together and it turns out
THAT'S HER DAMN SISTER?!?!?!
OMG Shocked Nice one Carnell. Doin' the sisters... cheers

lmfaooooooo
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Post  meganmyxxb5fan on Sun Jun 29, 2008 10:25 pm

bups new Page Bumps
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Post  MiSSMiNAJ. on Tue Jul 01, 2008 7:02 am

*--new reader.
this storyy is great
i cant believe nina would allow herself to be the other woman
i feel sorryy for yasmeen
but wtff THATS HER SISTER ?!
veryy trifling
buuuump.
--tatianna

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Post  TEDDY™ on Thu Jul 03, 2008 8:23 am

It had been six long weeks and I hadn't seen Nina once. I pleaded with Yasmin to forgive me, and she finally gave in. Of course she was hesitant and I couldn't blame her. I scrubbed the crusted food off of our plates from dinner the night before, and Yasmin came up behind me and rubbed my chest.
"Hey handsome." she said and I took off my gloves and sat them on the counter.
"Sup ma?"
I walked into the living room and she followed. I could feel her on my heels.
"You want to go out tonight?"
I sighed heavily, not wanting to go out again and watch my wife party it up while I sat on the sideline.
"Not really, no."
She plopped down with me on the couch.
"Carnelllllllll . Please? You don't want to be with me?"
"Yasmin you know you always blow me off when we go out. Why bring me anyways?"
Her face showed sadness and she poked out her lip. Damn. She knew I hated that shit.
"No Yasmin. Go out and have fun without me."
I made my way upstairs and slammed the bathroom door. I could hear her jingle her carkeys and thats all it took for me to have the house to myself. That's when I took my ass to bed.

YASMIN

I drove around the block a couple of times , just trying to get some things off my mind before I went and picked up Patrice. When I made up my mind that everything was cool, I pulled into Patrice's driveway and honked the horn.
"Hey girl." She said getting her tight skirt wearing behind in my car.
"Hey. Where are we heading tonight?" I said trying to keep my eyes directly on the road and not on Patrice's cleavage.
"Pull your shirt up!"
"No, this is what gets me drinks!"
She shimmied her little breasts in my face and made me swerve.
"Stop playing! So, were going to the bar?"
"Not the bar." she said excentuating that last word. "It's like an adult club."
"Yeah, with no dancing whatsoever."
I rolled my eyes and pulled onto the side of the road. We made our way into this door on the side of a building near an alley. This was an every night thing for us. Hitting the bar and then heading home drunk. Me, never... but Patrice of course was always tipsy from her third cosmopolitan. A couple of hours into the night I could feel my eyes getting dreary. Patrice was far beyond blowed and I carried her to my car. On the way, I could see a girl staring at me. I didn't think anything of it but she must of been a hatin' ass hoe, and plus it was dark so I didn't pay it any mind. I sat Patrice in the backseat and headed to her crib.




--okay so this is definitely a lame
post, but it'll get better. Promise :]


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Post  jay;love_ on Thu Jul 03, 2008 8:59 am

dayummm. drunk as a mofo!

neezy is a hott ghetto mess.
im mad at him for effin up THAT bad. -_-



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Post  TREViiSA on Fri Jul 04, 2008 10:19 am

SHE'S GAY.... I BET YOU SHE IS FINNA EXPERIMENT WITH THAT GIRL THATS STARRING AT HER OR PATRICE
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