Re: `coloring [outside] the lines; [+12]

SHAWN™ Sun May 18, 2008 7:52 am

BUMPz!

free - dumb . Sun May 18, 2008 4:40 pm

bump!

`faith . Mon May 19, 2008 12:19 am

thank you all for the lovely
bumps and comments, but
i refuse update until more
people read my homegyrl
jaylyn's stori, The One
That Got Away. Trust me,
you won't regret it. If you
think my stori is bomb,
her's is atomic. lol Hiroshima
&&' Nagasaki atomic. lol

Undacovab5lover Mon May 19, 2008 12:52 am

`faith . wrote:thank you all for the lovely
bumps and comments, but
i refuse update until more
people read my homegyrl
jaylyn's stori, The One
That Got Away. Trust me,
you won't regret it. If you
think my stori is bomb,
her's is atomic. lol Hiroshima
&&' Nagasaki atomic. lol

ok faith if thats what we have to do
ill make sure rokisha..kelsey.shatara
bump your friends story

_x-i heart pat.-x_ Mon May 19, 2008 12:54 am

bumpies!!!

:)MaKiN_SeXy Mon May 19, 2008 6:52 am

`faith . wrote:thank you all for the lovely
bumps and comments, but
i refuse update until more
people read my homegyrl
jaylyn's stori, The One
That Got Away. Trust me,
you won't regret it. If you
think my stori is bomb,
her's is atomic. lol Hiroshima
&&' Nagasaki atomic. lol

OK bump PLZ
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|*KiMA*| Mon May 19, 2008 6:27 pm

BUMPZ

free - dumb . Mon May 19, 2008 8:36 pm

Undacovab5lover wrote:lol i loved that post ot was funny especially im not hannah montana
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u can do it freedom!!!! i believe in her shell do it

bumpies girl!!!!

ofcourse yno belive in me !
lol .
B U M P S !

jay;love_ Tue May 20, 2008 1:04 am

`faith . wrote:thank you all for the lovely
bumps and comments, but
i refuse update until more
people read my homegyrl
jaylyn's stori, The One
That Got Away. Trust me,
you won't regret it. If you
think my stori is bomb,
her's is atomic. lol Hiroshima
&&' Nagasaki atomic. lol

<3 faith's cooler than the ice in my lemonadeee.
you don't know how much i appreciate that.

BUMPYOU!

_x-i heart pat.-x_ Tue May 20, 2008 1:09 am

bumpies!!!

Undacovab5lover Tue May 20, 2008 4:23 am

bumpz!!!!!!!!!!!!1

`faith . Wed May 21, 2008 12:03 am

jay;love_ wrote:
`faith . wrote:thank you all for the lovely
bumps and comments, but
i refuse update until more
people read my homegyrl
jaylyn's stori, The One
That Got Away. Trust me,
you won't regret it. If you
think my stori is bomb,
her's is atomic. lol Hiroshima
&&' Nagasaki atomic. lol

<3 faith's cooler than the ice in my lemonadeee.
you don't know how much i appreciate that.

BUMPYOU!

it's not.
you're an artist jay,
whose work should be treasured,
while they're still here.

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i'm freezing right now.
i'll try and post once i'm
warmer.
sorrri.
upz.

`faith . Wed May 21, 2008 1:35 am

`coloring [outside] the lines; [+12] - Page 3 Transbann

Characters Introduced:

`coloring [outside] the lines; [+12] - Page 3 Cnelpic

Carnell Young

`coloring [outside] the lines; [+12] - Page 3 Marpic

Marcell Widly

`coloring [outside] the lines; [+12] - Page 3 Treypic

Tremaine Neverson

.three:: thee finest.

“Hey Trey, Carnell, Marcel,” said a group of scantily clad girls as they passed by. They smiled amongst themselves before saying, “Hey.” They girls giggled before quickening their walk.
Tremaine Neverson, Carnell, and Marcel Wildy were Cedar Ridges finest, whether it came to looks, athletics, or just pure swagger. They were the best and knew it.
“I love being on top,” said a content Trey. He was the most popular boy at Cedar Ridge High, a senior, everyone loved him, and all the girls wanted a piece of him. He was on the top of the world.
Carnell and Marcel just looked at each other. “Ay, Trey, we’ll see you later. We can’t afford another late,” Marcel stated. “Me either. Lunch,” said Tremaine. Marcel and Carnell nodded their heads and were off.
“What happened Saturday night with Karli?” asked Marcel. Carnell’s head ached just remembering. “So we went to the movies, but didn’t end up watching it-” “Why?” asked Marcel. “If your impatient ass would just wait you’d find out,” Carnell snapped back, laughing slightly. “We got kicked out of the movie theater because we were all over each other. So, we ended up back at her place and she tells me she wants to cut the foreplay and fuck. We get to her bedroom and I’m kissing her neck while she unbuckling my jeans. Next thing I know she moans, ‘Trey.’” Marcel stopped walking dead in his tracks. “You’re bullshittin’ me right?” Marcel pleaded. Carnell answered, “I wish. Karli was just another girl tryna use me to get to Trey. I just grabbed my clothes and gave her Trey’s cell number before I left.” “I don’t get it. How do you always seem to attract the sheisty girls?” A discouraged Carnell said, “I dunno... It’s not even about sex. Just give me a girl who wants me for me and I’d be good.” “I hear you.” He ran his hand over the waves in his hair before he threw the hood of his BBC hoodie over this head. “Ay, come on. We gotta dip if we’re gonna get to Chemistry on time.”

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boring i know. i
just needed to
introduce them. i
promise next post
will be long and
interesting. it's where
the stori takes off.
so...
upz.

bRy@nL0v3sM3 Wed May 21, 2008 2:39 am

bumpz

jay;love_ Wed May 21, 2008 2:45 am

dang.
thats pretty sad.

they use him to get to someone else...?
thats unheard of.

it wasn't boring!
it was firee, as always!
BUMPSS.

_x-i heart pat.-x_ Wed May 21, 2008 3:15 am

bumpies!!!

Undacovab5lover Wed May 21, 2008 5:03 am

o snap bumpies that deep using people sp uncalled for!!!

kelly's_1inonly_homegurl Wed May 21, 2008 5:04 am

Undacovab5lover wrote:o snap bumpies that deep using people sp uncalled for!!!

thats a da*n shame u so shouldnt use people!!!
bumpz!!!

bryans_homegurl_4life Wed May 21, 2008 5:04 am

jay;love_ wrote:dang.
thats pretty sad.

they use him to get to someone else...?
thats unheard of.

it wasn't boring!
it was firee, as always!
BUMPSS.

yep what she said haha

bumpz!!!

patrick's_1inonly Wed May 21, 2008 5:05 am

dang i would never use ppl

bumpies!!!

*intotherush Wed May 21, 2008 6:59 am

dang she's sickings me how dare the both of them

bumpies faith

free - dumb . Wed May 21, 2008 7:29 am

aah ! marcel and trey !
lol anyway, that is wrong . HOW CAN THEY USE THAT SEXY CHOCOLATE?!
its just sick and wrong lol . sick and wrong .
bumps !

|*KiMA*| Wed May 21, 2008 11:23 pm

bumpz

jay;love_ Fri May 23, 2008 1:00 am

dummy .. wrote:aah ! marcel and trey !
lol anyway, that is wrong . HOW CAN THEY USE THAT SEXY CHOCOLATE?!
its just sick and wrong lol . sick and wrong .
bumps !

lmao.

bumpssszz.

they2fkid. Fri May 23, 2008 2:57 am

up' z.

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