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Re: `coloring [outside] the lines; [+12]
i had to write something
while i waited for the
voting to finish. &&'
yes jay yall get to vote for
his date next post. then
you'll find out how free picked.
sound good?? lol upz.
while i waited for the
voting to finish. &&'
yes jay yall get to vote for
his date next post. then
you'll find out how free picked.
sound good?? lol upz.
Re: `coloring [outside] the lines; [+12]
yall need to bump. lol
i'm in the middle of
writing this long ass,
lovely update, but yall
won't be getting to it
for a while. *does evil
laugh* lol upz.
i'm in the middle of
writing this long ass,
lovely update, but yall
won't be getting to it
for a while. *does evil
laugh* lol upz.
Re: `coloring [outside] the lines; [+12]
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW POOR NELLY WELLY BEAR LOL
DANCER OR STRIPPER?
BUMPIES FAITH BUMPIES
DANCER OR STRIPPER?
BUMPIES FAITH BUMPIES
*intotherush- Posts : 66
Join date : 2008-05-02
Age : 32
Re: `coloring [outside] the lines; [+12]
`faith . wrote:yall need to bump. lol
i'm in the middle of
writing this long ass,
lovely update, but yall
won't be getting to it
for a while. *does evil
laugh* lol upz.
your evil faith lol .
Re: `coloring [outside] the lines; [+12]
just dancer, if it was a strip*intotherush wrote:DANCER OR STRIPPER?
i would've given it a tacky
name. lol
&&' free, i am not. lol
Re: `coloring [outside] the lines; [+12]
.eleven:: choices version 2.O.
“How many more question are there?” said impatient Carnell. “We’re almost done. Nell, you want to date girls from our school?” “Naw, that’s too close for comfort.” “Kay. Now all we need is a pic and personal statement, which is what you looking for in a girl.” Carnell took his laptop away from Marcel & looked up Lloyd lyrics. He was looking for the lyrics to 'Valentine.' He settled on the first verse and the hook:
Head rush
From a touch
My emotions erupt
Realize that I'm stuck
Trapped inside of her seduction
Losing my mind each and everytime, she's around
'Tell Scotty "beam me up", am I in another world?
Oh Ms. Lady Luck, I done met the perfect girl
So could this be true lovin’ that I found?
Don't know what to do, so baby I
Give my heart to you, my valentine
Through and through, a thousand times
It feels so true this love of mine
He then went through all the pictures he had of himself on his computer. He eventually settled on pic of him a beater smirking which showed off tattoo he got for his sixteenth birthday. Marcel sat down next to jump as he clicked the jump off button. A page loaded with for thumbnails. Carnell clicked on the first one and watched the profile expand.
Carnell liked what he saw. From her auburn brown curly hair, full lips light caramel skin and her curvy figure in that sassy pose, he loved it all. “Sexy and she’s deep too. What more could a guy ask for? Next profile.”
“An girl who quotes Jay-Z songs. Gotta love that.” “She plays ball, likes to chill & is a b-girl. She’s a female you,” said Marcel. From the fitted on her head to the pose she struck, her swag was just mean and certified. She was guttah and he liked that. A lot.
Her quote hit her like a bullet to his heart. It was everything he had been going through lately. He understood her. He had been burned by Hallie, but still wanted to give his heart to someone, but who?
“Looks like she likes to have fun,” Carnell mentioned. “Nothing wrong with that.” “Absolutely nothing.” “Nellz,” he paused, “she’s hot.” Erica had gorgeous long flowing black hair and mocha skin that just glowed, high cheek bones, dark eyes that just drew you in & a tight body. Carnell just laughed. “Naw, forreal, you decided you don’t wanna date her, you know who to pass her to.” “Marcel, she’s not a blunt.” “Shit, I’d smoke her.”
Carnell walked away from best friend shaking his head. “Who’s it gonna be?” Carnell sat in the chair in the corner of his room & thought. If he picked the wrong girl that would lower this trust in love even more. But they each sounded so good. But who to choose?
Head rush
From a touch
My emotions erupt
Realize that I'm stuck
Trapped inside of her seduction
Losing my mind each and everytime, she's around
'Tell Scotty "beam me up", am I in another world?
Oh Ms. Lady Luck, I done met the perfect girl
So could this be true lovin’ that I found?
Don't know what to do, so baby I
Give my heart to you, my valentine
Through and through, a thousand times
It feels so true this love of mine
He then went through all the pictures he had of himself on his computer. He eventually settled on pic of him a beater smirking which showed off tattoo he got for his sixteenth birthday. Marcel sat down next to jump as he clicked the jump off button. A page loaded with for thumbnails. Carnell clicked on the first one and watched the profile expand.
1. Kierra
Age: 16
Hobbies: volunteering, tennis, reading, networking
Compatibility: 92%
Personal Statement:
There are 6,470,818,671 people in the world. Some are running scared. Some are coming home. Some tell lies to make it through the day. Others are just now facing the truth. Some are evil men, at war with good. And some are good, struggling with evil. 6 billion people in the world, 6 billion souls, and all you need is one.
Age: 16
Hobbies: volunteering, tennis, reading, networking
Compatibility: 92%
Personal Statement:
There are 6,470,818,671 people in the world. Some are running scared. Some are coming home. Some tell lies to make it through the day. Others are just now facing the truth. Some are evil men, at war with good. And some are good, struggling with evil. 6 billion people in the world, 6 billion souls, and all you need is one.
Carnell liked what he saw. From her auburn brown curly hair, full lips light caramel skin and her curvy figure in that sassy pose, he loved it all. “Sexy and she’s deep too. What more could a guy ask for? Next profile.”
2. Rokisha
Age: 15
Hobbies: basketball, music, chilling, b-girl
Compatibility: 90%
Personal Statement:
If I was your girlfriend
I'll be there for you, if somebody hurts you
Even if that sombody's me
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be
And so I put this on my life
Nobody or nothing will ever come between us
And I promise I'll give my life
my love and my trust if you was my boyfriend
Put this on my life
The air that I breathe in, all that I believe in
I promise I'll give my life
my love and my trust if you was my boyfriend
Age: 15
Hobbies: basketball, music, chilling, b-girl
Compatibility: 90%
Personal Statement:
If I was your girlfriend
I'll be there for you, if somebody hurts you
Even if that sombody's me
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be
And so I put this on my life
Nobody or nothing will ever come between us
And I promise I'll give my life
my love and my trust if you was my boyfriend
Put this on my life
The air that I breathe in, all that I believe in
I promise I'll give my life
my love and my trust if you was my boyfriend
“An girl who quotes Jay-Z songs. Gotta love that.” “She plays ball, likes to chill & is a b-girl. She’s a female you,” said Marcel. From the fitted on her head to the pose she struck, her swag was just mean and certified. She was guttah and he liked that. A lot.
3.Trevisa
Age: 15
Hobbies: music, partying, computers
Compatibility: 85%
Personal Statement:
"To be brave is to love someone unconditionally, without expecting anything in return. To just give. That takes courage, because we don't want to fall on our faces or leave ourselves open to hurt." -Madonna
Age: 15
Hobbies: music, partying, computers
Compatibility: 85%
Personal Statement:
"To be brave is to love someone unconditionally, without expecting anything in return. To just give. That takes courage, because we don't want to fall on our faces or leave ourselves open to hurt." -Madonna
Her quote hit her like a bullet to his heart. It was everything he had been going through lately. He understood her. He had been burned by Hallie, but still wanted to give his heart to someone, but who?
4. Erica
Age: 16
Hobbies: sports, dancing, pulling pranks, partying
Compatibility: 82%
Personal Statement:
Baby seems like everywhere I go
I see you, from your eyes, your smile
It's like I breathe you, helplessly I reminisce
Don't want to compare nobody to you
Boy, I try to catch myself
But I'm out of control
Your sexiness is so appealing
I can't let it go
Know that I can't get over you
'Cause everything I see is you
And I don't want no substitute
Baby I swear it's deja vu
Know that I can't get over you
'Cause everything I see is you
And I don't want no substitute
Baby I swear it's deja vu
Age: 16
Hobbies: sports, dancing, pulling pranks, partying
Compatibility: 82%
Personal Statement:
Baby seems like everywhere I go
I see you, from your eyes, your smile
It's like I breathe you, helplessly I reminisce
Don't want to compare nobody to you
Boy, I try to catch myself
But I'm out of control
Your sexiness is so appealing
I can't let it go
Know that I can't get over you
'Cause everything I see is you
And I don't want no substitute
Baby I swear it's deja vu
Know that I can't get over you
'Cause everything I see is you
And I don't want no substitute
Baby I swear it's deja vu
“Looks like she likes to have fun,” Carnell mentioned. “Nothing wrong with that.” “Absolutely nothing.” “Nellz,” he paused, “she’s hot.” Erica had gorgeous long flowing black hair and mocha skin that just glowed, high cheek bones, dark eyes that just drew you in & a tight body. Carnell just laughed. “Naw, forreal, you decided you don’t wanna date her, you know who to pass her to.” “Marcel, she’s not a blunt.” “Shit, I’d smoke her.”
Carnell walked away from best friend shaking his head. “Who’s it gonna be?” Carnell sat in the chair in the corner of his room & thought. If he picked the wrong girl that would lower this trust in love even more. But they each sounded so good. But who to choose?
“I think I know who I’m pickin’...”
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Once again it’s time to vote.
is it:
Kierra,
Rokisha,
Trevisa,
Or Erica?
again you get vote,
so pick wisely.
the voting will be over:
idk, lol
whenever the next update
is posted.
*intotherush- Posts : 66
Join date : 2008-05-02
Age : 32
Re: `coloring [outside] the lines; [+12]
*--new reader
Ch. 1 Review||Comments
the first post wasn't even boring faith
lolsz
carnell sucks for not saying hi
Ch.2 R||C
i would not have rejected a kiss from chris ;]
free needs to ask whoever out
Ch. 3 R||C
how thee hell she gonna sayy Trey's name fcking Carnell?!
like OMGGG your fckin dumb
Ch.4 R||C
whoever did that mural is dumb as hell
and woahh bryan def. dissed free
Ch. 5 R||C
bryan better not go out with that girl
Ch. 6 R||C
he was out with some chick?!
ohh wow
Ch. 7 R||C
she's a whore !
im glad Trey didn't stayy with her
that could ruin their friendship
Ch. 8 R||C
i reallyy hope this page helps her
and that was prettyy intense
Ch. 9 R||C
travisss mccoy<3
but wow she got some good boys to choose from !
Ch. 10 R||C
danggg these girls get around !
aww the poor babyy got heartbroken =[
Ch. 11 R||C
“Naw, forreal, you decided you don’t wanna date her, you know who to pass her to.”
“Marcel, she’s not a blunt.” “Shit, I’d smoke her.”
lMAOO !
but i choose Erica
--tatianna.
Ch. 1 Review||Comments
the first post wasn't even boring faith
lolsz
carnell sucks for not saying hi
Ch.2 R||C
i would not have rejected a kiss from chris ;]
free needs to ask whoever out
Ch. 3 R||C
how thee hell she gonna sayy Trey's name fcking Carnell?!
like OMGGG your fckin dumb
Ch.4 R||C
whoever did that mural is dumb as hell
and woahh bryan def. dissed free
Ch. 5 R||C
bryan better not go out with that girl
Ch. 6 R||C
he was out with some chick?!
ohh wow
Ch. 7 R||C
she's a whore !
im glad Trey didn't stayy with her
that could ruin their friendship
Ch. 8 R||C
i reallyy hope this page helps her
and that was prettyy intense
Ch. 9 R||C
travisss mccoy<3
but wow she got some good boys to choose from !
Ch. 10 R||C
danggg these girls get around !
aww the poor babyy got heartbroken =[
Ch. 11 R||C
“Naw, forreal, you decided you don’t wanna date her, you know who to pass her to.”
“Marcel, she’s not a blunt.” “Shit, I’d smoke her.”
lMAOO !
but i choose Erica
--tatianna.
MiSSMiNAJ.- Posts : 18
Join date : 2008-06-30
Re: `coloring [outside] the lines; [+12]
welppp, i'll pick later.
im torn between two, lol!
i love this voting thing! hahahah!
and marcel is stupid "shit, i'd smoke her."
he's so dumb lol.
BUMP!
im torn between two, lol!
i love this voting thing! hahahah!
and marcel is stupid "shit, i'd smoke her."
he's so dumb lol.
BUMP!
Re: `coloring [outside] the lines; [+12]
TATI !MiSSMiNAJ. wrote:*--new reader
Ch. 1 Review||Comments
the first post wasn't even boring faith
lolsz
carnell sucks for not saying hi
Ch.2 R||C
i would not have rejected a kiss from chris ;]
free needs to ask whoever out
Ch. 3 R||C
how thee hell she gonna sayy Trey's name fcking Carnell?!
like OMGGG your fckin dumb
Ch.4 R||C
whoever did that mural is dumb as hell
and woahh bryan def. dissed free
Ch. 5 R||C
bryan better not go out with that girl
Ch. 6 R||C
he was out with some chick?!
ohh wow
Ch. 7 R||C
she's a whore !
im glad Trey didn't stayy with her
that could ruin their friendship
Ch. 8 R||C
i reallyy hope this page helps her
and that was prettyy intense
Ch. 9 R||C
travisss mccoy<3
but wow she got some good boys to choose from !
Ch. 10 R||C
danggg these girls get around !
aww the poor babyy got heartbroken =[
Ch. 11 R||C
“Naw, forreal, you decided you don’t wanna date her, you know who to pass her to.”
“Marcel, she’s not a blunt.” “Shit, I’d smoke her.”
lMAOO !
but i choose Erica
--tatianna.
=)
Re: `coloring [outside] the lines; [+12]
tati, it took your ass
long enough to join. lol
welcome. &&' jay, hurry up
cause if i post within you
voting, you get no say,
so make up your mind ASAP!
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thanks for the bumps.
more soon, promise.
upz.
long enough to join. lol
welcome. &&' jay, hurry up
cause if i post within you
voting, you get no say,
so make up your mind ASAP!
------------------
thanks for the bumps.
more soon, promise.
upz.
Re: `coloring [outside] the lines; [+12]
`faith . wrote:tati, it took your ass
long enough to join. lol
welcome. &&' jay, hurry up
cause if i post within you
voting, you get no say,
so make up your mind ASAP!
------------------
thanks for the bumps.
more soon, promise.
upz.
hii faith =]
lolsz i knowww
i just got thee link from tay a few days ago
how you been?!
GREAT STORYY !
as usual
lolsz
and hi free =]
MiSSMiNAJ.- Posts : 18
Join date : 2008-06-30
Re: `coloring [outside] the lines; [+12]
thanks tati.
more 2mrw???
maybe friday.
i'd like more votes,
then i'll update.
upz.
more 2mrw???
maybe friday.
i'd like more votes,
then i'll update.
upz.
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